P 4 Pan

[wytchcroft]

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and tacking north north-west when the wind was in the south
i could tell where we were heading
prospero's other island where the pied piper took us
children
singing as we went

singing

yes i believe!

i have faith in your clockwork logic
we can fly along your wires

and we danced right off the stage
down along the trenches
and out of the age

we
do not age

under this flat feld
in the compass of an island
in our never never
land.

Comments

[agent-rouka.livejournal.com]

That is pretty. And kind of sad. *uncertainty!face*

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

hey thanks! *passes coffee cup*
:))

[agent-rouka.livejournal.com]

*DIVES FOR COFFEE*

Thank YOU. :)

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

you're welcome sweety! :))

[agent-rouka.livejournal.com]

You're so fluffy and agreeable. HOW can you be so chipper on a Wednesday morning? :)

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

ach, i'm faking it! ^^

[agent-rouka.livejournal.com]

Awww. You may growl and throw newspapers if you want to. :D

[reginaclarejane.livejournal.com]

Hey, there's Tinkerbell! Love her! ;)
That's a great piccie- and your poem- it's amazing. There is so much to it, I think- underneath it all. I get a hint of melancholy...
:)

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

well, the real story of Barrie and the 'lost boys' is quite tragic.

and thanks:))

[reginaclarejane.livejournal.com]

Hm... I'll have to look that up...

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

it's very strange and moving - but also very sad i'm afraid.

from the stories told to the children to the stage production of Peter Pan itself and beyond to the fates of Barrie and the family and friends, the pressure felt by some of 'being' Peter Pan, the events of WW1 and later etc.

[moraiwe.livejournal.com]

I am so love on you right nao. PETER PAN YAY!
It's a bit eerie that you posted this...I just found a Tinkerbell pen in the mail room and snagged it for my very own.

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

ah wicked! you and Tink should ne'er be seperated!:))

Peter Pan is Shoelace009's favourite.

[moraiwe.livejournal.com]

OH OH OH! ME TOO ME TOO!!!
Check out those pics I posted on my Flickr and see me and Tink at Disneyland!

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

Tis done my dear, and a real pleasure it was!:))

[delta-mai.livejournal.com]

This is sooo beautiful! Thanks for the link :D I am so saving this :D

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

oh i'm glad you liked it! thanks :))

[delta-mai.livejournal.com]

Where did you find it? DO you know who wrote it? :)

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

yeah - it was me. :)

[delta-mai.livejournal.com]

Wow! That's really impressive!!!!! *stunned* :D

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

aww... *look sheepish*
thanks! :)))

[inmyocean.livejournal.com]

You have underlying stories in your poetry. I like how you take classical pieces and reflect your version. You're very skilled and I enjoy reading you. :) I hope I can for a long time.

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

thanks :)) - this really was hard to write, to balance the elements i wanted, it was a very self conscious process, which is unusual for my doodlings.

and allow me to say that i look forward to further exploring your work also :))