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"Come child, you're supposed to walk in the dress - not through it!"
The tutor waved a hand.
"It is supposed to flow around you - like music, neh?"
Not the best analogy, thought Nandi, her face creasing to match the fabric.
She shifted her body awkwardly inside the material. It's not just the dress that doesn't fit.
Some girls maybe, some girls they could... like music. Some girls, she thought, like Inara.
.......................
sound plausible?
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Date: 2009-01-28 12:45 am (UTC)I liked the image of Nandi walking through the dress!
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Date: 2009-01-28 02:36 am (UTC)so believe me i'm glad of the support!:):)
as for the 'through' thing, yeh... Nandi is pretty strong is how i see her.
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Date: 2009-01-28 01:03 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-01-28 02:13 am (UTC)you knows i love ya -
so i'll just say CAKE
which is a nice word and we'll leave it at that:):):)
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Date: 2009-01-28 03:34 am (UTC)Cake...or Death!
Date: 2009-01-28 03:36 am (UTC)This has SO much imagery and flavor to it
Date: 2009-01-28 02:22 am (UTC)yeah, like chicken soup.
Re: This has SO much imagery and flavor to it
Date: 2009-01-28 03:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-01-28 02:06 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-01-28 02:15 am (UTC)and hey - thanks, encouragement is shiny:)
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Date: 2009-01-28 02:35 am (UTC)thanks!:)
Date: 2009-01-28 02:43 am (UTC)yeh i think that first line is Nandi.
the tough stuff is finding her a pre-HOG voice, so words like 'not the best analogy' Guild words, i figure, maybe parroting tutors a little??
i think Nandi's later learned voice is more real.
Yeh - it's tricky.
thanks again:)
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Date: 2009-01-28 02:37 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-01-28 02:40 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-01-28 09:33 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-01-28 12:16 pm (UTC)