and so it is
Dec. 30th, 2008 08:27 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
And so it is - as the night drifts
into the morning's blue arrival -
that i see you where you are not
that i hear your voice, the warm laugh
full of knowldege and doubt
stubbornly resisting the strangeness of life
the way it plays out in a distracted instant
between the blink of your eyes
an idle twisting of your hair
and the beauty of your quaker's hands
with their nervous semaphore
they would wave away a poem like this
and so it is.
into the morning's blue arrival -
that i see you where you are not
that i hear your voice, the warm laugh
full of knowldege and doubt
stubbornly resisting the strangeness of life
the way it plays out in a distracted instant
between the blink of your eyes
an idle twisting of your hair
and the beauty of your quaker's hands
with their nervous semaphore
they would wave away a poem like this
and so it is.
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Date: 2008-12-30 09:09 am (UTC)i like most of all
between the blink of your eyes
an idle twisting of your hair
merry xmas and happy new year!
yours,
s.
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Date: 2008-12-30 10:19 am (UTC)С Рождеством Христовым! :)
regards,
wytch
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Date: 2008-12-30 09:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-30 10:20 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-30 09:27 am (UTC)i can't even begin to tell you how perfect this reads.
i can see someone in front of my eyes as i read it.
very good.
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Date: 2008-12-30 10:22 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-30 10:55 am (UTC)very poetic...
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Date: 2008-12-30 10:57 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-30 01:54 pm (UTC)Just beautiful, my friend...
I loved the circle it made from beginning to end... "and so it is"... perfect.
:D
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Date: 2008-12-30 03:56 pm (UTC)but seriously, thank you!:))
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Date: 2008-12-30 01:55 pm (UTC)Спасибо!:)))
Date: 2008-12-30 04:00 pm (UTC)in the early hours i often think warmly of friends and such, and so today this little piece for one of them - and yes, they WOULD wave it away! they are worse than me at taking a compliment!:)))