Last piece

[wytchcroft]

and there's sunlight
gold upon the ruined brick

this was once a castle
but the king took sick 

singing hurry up my horses
hurry up the men
half way round the world we go
and back again.

....................................
posted a little early because i'm going out in a while.
thanks to everyone for the tremendous comments
and Mr Stapleton, this one is for you. :))

Comments

[med_cat]

A perfect conclusion to the trio of chess-themed poems :)

[stoshagownozad.livejournal.com]

magic magic

[reginaclarejane.livejournal.com]

"this was once a castle
but the king took sick..."

hm... i really like this line... there's so much of an undercurrent to it...

inspired pieces, my friend.
:)

[betsycontent.livejournal.com]

excellent conclusion to the triplet. last verse was my favorite. sounded like it was an established nursery rhyme that had already stood the test of time. :)))

thanks a lot!

[mr-stapleton.livejournal.com]

my friend, it's another little gem. and - i'm certainly indebted to you :)

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

thank you my friend :))

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

спасибо! :))

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

thank you :))

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

oh that's great to hear, thanks! :))

Re: thanks a lot!

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

as am i for your encouragement! :))

[med_cat]

You're welcome :)

[inmyocean.livejournal.com]

Bravo! I adore this one -- for the rhyme and for the opening two lines which took me some place. :):)

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

thanks my friend :)))

[mr-stapleton.livejournal.com]

dear friend, i've got your rhyme :) this concluding piece is like a breath indeed - light and inspirational. adorable! russian text is here:
http://mr-stapleton.livejournal.com/237710.html
thank you again very much!
yours, s.

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

ah my friend, what a wonderful dialog that is then, writer to writer! thank you :))

[bttrflyscar.livejournal.com]

that ending is priceless.

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

don't worry, the rest of me comes cheap! ;))

[neversremedy.livejournal.com]

I like the rhythm and imagery in this one.

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

thanks m'dear :))

[willowtreedance.livejournal.com]

Another great piece.

You might have posted it early but I'm reading it late lol

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

LOL! thanks :))