P 4 Pan

[wytchcroft]

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and tacking north north-west when the wind was in the south
i could tell where we were heading
prospero's other island where the pied piper took us
children
singing as we went

singing

yes i believe!

i have faith in your clockwork logic
we can fly along your wires

and we danced right off the stage
down along the trenches
and out of the age

we
do not age

under this flat feld
in the compass of an island
in our never never
land.

Comments

[agent-rouka.livejournal.com]

That is pretty. And kind of sad. *uncertainty!face*

[reginaclarejane.livejournal.com]

Hey, there's Tinkerbell! Love her! ;)
That's a great piccie- and your poem- it's amazing. There is so much to it, I think- underneath it all. I get a hint of melancholy...
:)

[moraiwe.livejournal.com]

I am so love on you right nao. PETER PAN YAY!
It's a bit eerie that you posted this...I just found a Tinkerbell pen in the mail room and snagged it for my very own.

[delta-mai.livejournal.com]

This is sooo beautiful! Thanks for the link :D I am so saving this :D

[inmyocean.livejournal.com]

You have underlying stories in your poetry. I like how you take classical pieces and reflect your version. You're very skilled and I enjoy reading you. :) I hope I can for a long time.