wytchcroft

This was written in 10 minutes as a response to Betsy's challenge, although i took some liberties with the rules!
The challenge as issued was:
choose any proverb, change it in some way, add five words (choose from: blackberry, voice, mother, cloud, whir, lick, needle, cliff), it must be 10 lines and you have 10 minutes to write it.
Anyone else care to try???
After all... nothing ventured - nothing sprained!

ha ha ha! boom boom!

Proverbs and Acts:

They found Adam curled foetal sideways among the dust and rubble of the science unit.

Somehow he had made it back, back home, to lay his head at the foot of the sparking remains of the unit producer that had been his mother.
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