Date: 2009-06-19 11:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] betsycontent.livejournal.com
love the ending. :) certain repeating lines really make this work for me, like the marble eyes that don't blink and "But when you float, everything is far away." almost wish this was a novel or novella so i could read more. :)


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