This (both parts 1 & 2) is awesome awesome awesome. You're making me want to take up writing poetry again. This feels so stream-of-consciousness - I don't know if you actually wrote it like that, but stream-of-consciousness/free-writing/whatever-you-want-to-call-it always makes for the best poetry, in my opinion.
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Date: 2008-11-15 07:43 pm (UTC)