The cut of the cloth : Nandi - a six line story.

[wytchcroft]

"Come child, you're supposed to walk in the dress - not through it!"
The tutor  waved a hand.
"It is supposed to flow around you - like music, neh?"
Not the best analogy, thought Nandi, her face creasing to match the fabric.
She shifted her body awkwardly inside the material. It's not just the dress that doesn't fit.
Some girls maybe, some girls they could... like music. Some girls, she thought, like Inara. 

.......................
sound plausible?

Comments

[reginaclarejane.livejournal.com]

Mm... sounds good to me! :)
I liked the image of Nandi walking through the dress!

[chalissa.livejournal.com]

Wow. This has SO much imagery and flavor to it, even in just six lines. You win this round of life.

[cptmalreynolds.livejournal.com]

More please?

[charlie-bz.livejournal.com]

I like! the first line is awesome!

[browncoat2x2]

Keep. Writing. :oD

[recycledfaery.livejournal.com]

oeee i love the images it conjures up in my mind. :)