a piece of ice

[wytchcroft]

ice connects us
my blistered fingers hold the fracture
all we are 
as water
fossils
deep within the complex geography
the lines that draw the map
the points of origin
the points between us
and lifted up the light spreads
wide and multicoloured
like a cloak
fit for dreamers. 

Comments

[stoshagownozad.livejournal.com]

winter lines - chilling...

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

:)) yes - i was just walking along a frozen river...

[reginaclarejane.livejournal.com]

Mmm... beautifully crafted, my friend.
"like a cloak
fit for dreamers."
I loved this particular line. I wish I had that cloak every once in a while- too much reality setting in lately...
:)

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

thank you indeed! :)

[gilliebeans.livejournal.com]

Lovely, really - it took me a few rereads to start to appreciate the richness. Should be set to music, it has a nice lyricism.

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

that's real nice of you - really i, well - it's appreciated! :D *hugs*

[chalissa.livejournal.com]

This is so lovely. I want to peel it off my screen and keep it forever.

[wytchcroft.livejournal.com]

SPRANG! the chord of happiness! thanks dear! :D

:)

[irishunchik.livejournal.com]

I'm just a dreamer...