ext_25296 ([identity profile] gilliebeans.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wytchcroft 2008-09-20 08:30 pm (UTC)

So creative! I liked this a lot; I saw the prompt but didn't have any idea how to relate it to the 'verse. Well done. I have to say, I particularly liked the detail here: "It was not a question, but the uniformed sergeant, who had accompanied the machine into Haymer's plush apartment, said matter-of-factly;" you convey a lot with that little detail. Well done!

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