You are a wytch of your word! It seems as though you have just slipped back into Firefly fic so effortlessly. I'm very happy - and can't wait for you to keep going with this.
Great start. So many questions contained in this fragment. Where was Inara? Who is Shepherd Face? And, I noticed he didn't mention Simon and River when he gave the role call about who was doing what. And, what is this all about? "No, I think they were NOT avoiding something else."
Other bits that I'm especially fond of:
and if not star-crossed love... then certainly crossed eyes seeing stars.
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Date: 2008-09-18 02:07 pm (UTC)Great start. So many questions contained in this fragment. Where was Inara? Who is Shepherd Face? And, I noticed he didn't mention Simon and River when he gave the role call about who was doing what.
And, what is this all about?
Other bits that I'm especially fond of:
and:
hee!