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wytchcroft) wrote2009-07-18 03:54 am
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New Tamlins - a spontaneous response to recycledfaery
and when the words dry up
and we read each others empty spaces
we mumble inchoate in our native state
animals bellowing the wild landscape
is it retreat to fold back into our selves
where skin and bone flaps into leaf
some crude and ancient magic
21 century Tamlins turned into a tree
speak with your fingers
sing out the wooden wonder
the rough bark
the curves and whorls of me
traced and known
through every transformation
fish or fowl or frog-like features
we strange new creatures
of the prehistoric future
insects scuttling
and the sound of the wind
as the day comes glistening
in the tropical rain
the damp earth listening
for our words are plain.
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*sighs wistfully mourning the loss of my lucky opera hat*
and THANKS:))
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:))
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thank you, my friend!
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it's not poetry but then again that's kind of the point i guess:)
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LOL! hell even I'M starting to warm up to it now:))
i really wasn't convinced by it to tell the truth, but i guess the scribbler cannot always judge the scribbling!
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This is wonderful- and that middle stanza, and this line in particular... "the curves and whorls of me"- ack, that's gorgeous.
More poetry, please, sir...
<3
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i'm glad you liked it!
to be honest, i've been very surprised by the encouraging response to this fragment.
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Yes, that is all I have to say!
*prints out*
:)
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and when the words dry up
and we read each others empty spaces
*memorizes* (Is that a word?)
is it retreat to fold back into our selves
*melts*
speak with your fingers? *smiley sigh*
prehistoric future? oh my
damp earth listening
for our words are plain
*hushed silence*
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it was a bit (ok, a LOT) presumptious of me i know, but...
and i am really glad you lked it:)))
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