well i think i comprehended the original structure - but it just made me write very badly, probably through self consciousness - or maybe the equivalent words are lacking in the Engish language?
It's likely the fault is mine - an academic poet would surely have done better.
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Re: original rhyme structure and the lyrical poetry
Date: 2009-06-08 07:05 pm (UTC)It's likely the fault is mine - an academic poet would surely have done better.