lol! i just know that i really like it, and if i do, so will others. it's witty and fun, and a relief from the free verse i write most of the time! :) crafting it into something potentially publishable seems worthwhile. hell, as it is it's fine, too. it's just that the gaiman book sprang to mind. i could envision it as a dark dr. seuss. :) (ala "i will not eat the poisoned ham! i will not eat it sam i am!" :)))