I have no idea what the Serenity movie is about is or the firefly series for that matter, but my goodness, this was entertaining! You are such a good writer! The thing I find hard about writing a story or a play is the converstion parts of it, and not only the conversations between characters but the ones each character has inside their head. You were aces with that!
I mean, man, this was good. I liked Inara- she's a woman another woman can really sink her teeth into- oh, and not like a cat-fight or anything, but she's strong and witty and troubled- that's so cool. Every woman can understand that...
Anyway, I am glad this got uploaded and I am looking forward to the next part- I think...;)