Oh, wytchy, I love this! you've crofted...ahem...quite a story here.

This line...this line right here delighted me to know end: Losing consciousness had became mighty fashionable of a sudden on the dirt moon of Scudder 518aa54C.

And your Carnivale is showing. not a complaint either. Management. love it! And Jayne thinking River was a bot. Mal using Inara's unconcious feet as a weapon. Lastly, I really like how you have Simon working with the underground. That makes perfect sense to me.

Can't wait for the next part!