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wytchcroft ([personal profile] wytchcroft) wrote2010-04-15 03:33 pm
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Last piece



and there's sunlight
gold upon the ruined brick

this was once a castle
but the king took sick 

singing hurry up my horses
hurry up the men
half way round the world we go
and back again
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posted a little early because i'm going out in a while.
thanks to everyone for the tremendous comments
and Mr Stapleton, this one is for you. :))

[identity profile] inmyocean.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
Bravo! I adore this one -- for the rhyme and for the opening two lines which took me some place. :):)

[identity profile] wytchcroft.livejournal.com 2010-04-16 01:32 am (UTC)(link)
thanks my friend :)))