ext_219356 ([identity profile] inmyocean.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wytchcroft 2010-04-15 03:38 am (UTC)

Nice change in colour and feel/pace.

The first and last stanza in this are my favourite and I like that because it means a poem begins and ends well and it gives a piece an overall completed feeling.

:)

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