death by chess machine

[wytchcroft]

it's so degrading
watching pieces parading
across the empty squares
across the deep blue screen

death by chess machine.

Comments

[avosurt.livejournal.com]

Again - yours pretty picture!)

[inmyocean.livejournal.com]

Oooo, this is interesting. I very much like how the chessboard is blue and forms a wave pattern/spiral ... goes wonderfully with "across the deep blue screen".

[mr-stapleton.livejournal.com]

it's really great!!!
thank you my friend! :)

[recycledfaery.livejournal.com]

LOL at your location.
Cewl post too.:)

[bttrflyscar.livejournal.com]

love the poem. Love it.

[betsycontent.livejournal.com]

found it! lol! and you've captured the feeling of that experience perfectly. ;)