such a fantastic comment - i... *blushes*

ok, well, mostly i'm just relieved and glad it made sense and worked.

there IS a lot that could be expanded (although sustaining the narrative voice? tricky) - it's tell vs show in a short story... hard to balance.

the ideas in the story are like the memories in Eva's head are like the nanos in her blood - and it was fun truing to give everything an equal weight.

and - what you said, pretty much all there is really, thank you so much, i mean it and appreciate it. :))