anyway.. I am a kind of writer too and I also know what it is to post parts of untreated... just ideas sometimes... so we probably share the same things ^)
that is why I know that feedback is so... important? maybe.
I just still need time to read in live English, 'cause I am a technical translator, it;s absolutely different thing - live English, live speech, etc. So i need time to get in there :)))
Would it be in Russian, you probaby might have almost immediate feedback from me - at least for the things related to Firely 6) whcih is very fresh for me.