ext_42531 ([identity profile] betsycontent.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wytchcroft 2009-11-26 10:12 am (UTC)

love this. i can feel the tram swaying back and forth. the chorus is brilliant, esp. love the line: "she brushes back her sleeves with a doctor's ease." write more lyrics and poems! :)
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